Tuesday, February 12, 2008

Press Release #3 Draft

For Immediate Release


February 12, 2008


Contact:Preston Parker, president/founder
Cache Valley Area Investors Association
www.cvaia.com
cachevaia@gmail.com
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Cache Valley Financial Education Meetings Announced


LOGAN, Utah- A brand new and exciting educational experience has just been announced for residents in and around Cache Valley. Its primary cause is to promote financial education and teach people that earned income isn’t the only way to make you a millionaire. This is free education to help you become financially independent and to do so with lots of happiness.

Preston Parker is the president and founder of the Cache Valley association. He started teaching the classes because the thinks that people should “Do the job they want to do, because they love it.” He stresses that people shouldn’t do certain jobs just to make a lot of money. The groups meet every other Thursday at 7:00 p.m. at the Cache Chambers of Commerce at 160 N. Main St, in Logan.

The Cache Valley Area Investors Association was started in August 2007 by Preston Parker and has 40 members involved with it.

Now is the time to make smart decisions concerning your financial status so you can be financially independent in the years to come. The sooner you get involved, the sooner you can reap your rewards and be making interest off of your money.

For more information contact Corey Sparks at corey.sparks@aggiemail.usu.edu or by calling 435-770-1129.

4 comments:

Katie H Seamons said...

Corey-
I enjoyed your wording, but I thought that maybe your paragraphs were a little long? Maybe break them up a bit more and throw in a few more quotes.. Just a thought!
Katie

Jackson & Celeste said...

Katie makes a good point. The only other thing I was going to suggest is to de-capitalize the "D" in the word "doing". I think it was in the second paragraph, and it was a partial quote that started in mid-sentence. I think that's AP style, but I could be wrong. Other than that, great job.

Nolan said...

I think in one place you meant to say he, but instead you said the. It was good though.

Preston said...

The title should be capitalized when listed in contact information.

It's only one group that meets every other Thursday.

"Street'" when abbreviated, needs a period.

I would remain in the third person and not use "you" for this release.

Be sure to list your title in the closing contact info.